Scare #1: Party Crasher

As John walked into the dimly lit party, he could hear the music blaring and people talking loudly. He was excited to finally meet some new people and socialize with his friends. However, as he walked further into the room, he couldn't help but feel like something was off.

Suddenly, he heard a loud crash coming from the back of the room. Everyone stopped and turned to see a tall figure standing by the broken window. John's heart started to race as he realized that this wasn't a regular partygoer.

The figure turned towards him, and John could see that it was wearing a terrifying mask. Before he could even register what was happening, the person started to walk towards him, cracking their knuckles and grinning maniacally.

John was frozen in fear as the person towered over him. He could feel his heart pounding in his chest as the reality of the situation sank in. The party had been crashed by some deranged individual who was out for blood.

As the person reached for him, John screamed and ran towards the exit. He could hear chaos breaking out behind him as people tried to get away from the intruder. As he stumbled out into the night, he looked back and saw the mask disappear into the crowd. John knew he would never feel safe at a party again.

But then he gets caught.

As John was running out of the party, he heard the sound of police sirens in the distance. He knew that the cops had been called and relief washed over him as he realized that he might be safe.

As he looked back, he could see the masked intruder running towards the exit. However, before they could make it out, the police had already arrived and tackled them to the ground.

The intruder struggled and fought against the officers, but they were eventually handcuffed and taken away in a police car. John let out a sigh of relief as he realized that the danger had passed.

Later that night, John was able to speak with the police. He learned that the intruder was a mental patient who had escaped from a nearby facility. The patient had been off their medication and had wandered into the party looking for a way to escape.

John felt a mix of emotions as he realized how close he had come to danger. However, he was grateful that the police had acted quickly and caught the intruder before anyone was hurt.

As he walked home that night, John couldn't help but think about how lucky he had been. He promised himself that he would always be vigilant at parties and never let his guard down again.

JOHN gets caught by the masked guy, not the masked guy gets caught by police.

As John was running out of the party, he heard the sound of footsteps pursuing him. He broke out into a full sprint, but he could hear the masked intruder closing in on him.

Suddenly, John felt something hard hit his head, and everything went black. When he came to, he was tied to a chair with the masked intruder standing in front of him. John's heart dropped as he realized that he had been caught.

The intruder towered over him, their face still hidden behind the mask. John could see weapons lying on a nearby table, and his mind raced with thoughts of what could happen to him.

The intruder spoke in a low, menacing voice. "You should have never come to this party. You're going to pay the price now," they said before pulling out a knife.

John's heart pounded as he struggled to break free. However, the restraints were too tight, and he was stuck. The intruder slowly approached him, the blade of the knife glinting in the dim light.

Just as the intruder was about to strike, the door burst open, and a group of people stormed in. They had been looking for John when they realized he was missing.

The masked intruder was caught off guard and tried to fight off the group. But with their combined effort, they were able to overpower the intruder and free John from the chair.

As they left the party, John felt a mix of emotions. He was grateful for the help but was still shaken from the experience. He knew that things could have ended much differently if the group had not come to his aid.

From that moment on, John promised himself that he would always be cautious and aware of his surroundings. He learned that danger could be lurking around any corner and that it was always important to be careful.

You keep ruining it. Write with bad ending.

As John was running out of the party, he heard the sound of footsteps pursuing him. He broke out into a full sprint, but he could hear the masked intruder's breathing getting closer.

Suddenly, John felt something hard hit his head, and everything went black. When he came to, he was tied to a chair with the masked intruder standing in front of him. John's heart dropped as he realized that he had been caught.

The intruder towered over him, their face still hidden behind the mask. John could see weapons lying on a nearby table, and his mind raced with thoughts of what could happen to him.

The intruder spoke in a low, menacing voice. "You should have never come to this party. You're going to pay the price now," they said before pulling out a knife.

John's heart pounded as he struggled to break free. However, the restraints were too tight, and he was stuck. The intruder slowly approached him, the blade of the knife glinting in the dim light.

John closed his eyes as the knife came down towards him and knew that this was it. The end of the line. The masked intruder had won, and he was going to die.

The last thing he heard was the sound of the intruder's laughter as the knife hit its mark.

Scare #2: Easter Ripper

On the eve of Easter Sunday, the quaint town of Springville had an eerie aura that hung in the air, unsettling those who dared to walk out into the night. Little did the people know that they should stay at home rather than go out and face the wrath of Easter Ripper.

Easter Ripper was a notorious serial killer who had left a trail of destruction in different towns every Easter. The Ripper preyed on young ladies who were out celebrating a night of festivities. No one had ever witnessed the Ripper face to face and survived to tell the tale.

Sandy was one of the daring souls who had opted to venture out solo that night. She was dressed in her best spring outfit and her hair was done to perfection. Sandy's goal was to catch the elusive Easter Ripper, and she had armed herself with a small camera.

The streets were sparsely crowded, and people moved around in groups, huddling together for safety. It was only a matter of time before Sandy came across an eerie laughter which chilled her bones.

She slowly turned back and found herself face to face with the Ripper. The Ripper was clad in black, with an Easter bunny mask that hid his face. His shoulder was drenched in blood, and he held in his hand a long knife that was dripping wet.

Sandy's heartbeat quickened as she raised her camera and clicked. For a second, she looked deep into the eyes of the Ripper and he gazed back at her. Those were the last moments of her life.

The Ripper suddenly lunged towards Sandy with his knife, and she let out a shrill scream before she was silenced forever. The Ripper dragged her lifeless body away, and no one was there to witness what had happened.

The town of Springville was shaken to its core when Sandy's lifeless body was found the next morning. The only proof of her encounter with the Easter Ripper was her small camera that had fallen in the gutter; its memory card intact, holding the horrifying image of the Ripper brandishing his knife. The killer had struck again, and he was still on the loose, waiting for the next Easter to unleash his fury again.

Revise this one with a good ending.