Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair, so they cleaned their rooms and did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning so they could go that afternoon.
What would be the best way to correct the error in style?
A. Because Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair, they cleaned their rooms and did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning to be ready to go in the afternoon.
B. Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair. They cleaned their rooms. They did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning. They were ready to go in the afternoon.
C. To the fair Patty and Joel wanted to go with their parents. First thing Saturday morning, they cleaned their rooms. In the afternoon, they could go.
A. Because Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair, they cleaned their rooms and did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning to be ready to go in the afternoon.
A. Because Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair, they cleaned their rooms and did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning to be ready to go in the afternoon.
The best way to correct the error in style is option A: "Because Patty and Joel wanted their parents to take them to the fair, they cleaned their rooms and did all their chores first thing on Saturday morning to be ready to go in the afternoon."
Option A is the best choice because it maintains a clear and concise structure while also accurately conveying the cause and effect relationship between Patty and Joel's desire to go to the fair and their action of cleaning their rooms and doing their chores. This option also maintains a consistent tense and avoids unnecessary repetition, making it the most coherent and stylistically correct choice.