Thesis - Overcoming obstacles is important because life will present various challenges, and dealing with hardships helps shape our character and changes our mentality.
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Body Paragraph: (Reason from thesis which should be Overcoming obstacles is important because life will present various challenges, and dealing with hardships helps shape our character and changes our mentality.)
First, create and include a Topic sentence which is one sentence that introduces the supporting idea from your thesis. Next, include and give a specific example for your first reason such as Thomas Edison remember to elaborate by adding detailed information for the specific example. Then, write three to four sentences that explain that example. Lastly, what other details will support the topic sentence based on own knowledge?
Topic Sentence: Overcoming obstacles is important because it helps us to develop our character and change our mentality.
Example: For example, Thomas Edison famously failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb.
Explanation: Despite the numerous failures, Edison never gave up and kept trying until he eventually succeeded. This demonstrates the importance of perseverance and resilience in the face of adversity. His determination and refusal to accept defeat serves as an inspiring example of how overcoming obstacles can lead to success.
Supporting Details: Additionally, overcoming obstacles can help us to build confidence and self-esteem. It can also teach us valuable lessons about ourselves and our capabilities, and help us to become more resilient and better equipped to handle future challenges.