While delivering a speech about school participation, the principal used this inspirational quote . . . “Working as a team, with enthusiasm and a positive outlook, will lead to the achievement of great outcomes.”
"Working as a team, with enthusiasm and a positive outlook, is like adding sprinkles to a cake - it leads to the sweet taste of great outcomes!"
The best revision of this sentence could be: "The principal used this inspirational quote while delivering a speech about school participation: 'By working together as a team, with enthusiasm and a positive outlook, we can achieve great outcomes.'"
