Can someone please help me reword this?! Thanks! I don't like what I did oof
Many every day activities lead to global warming because they produce pollution. When gas is burned in a car, it produces carbon dioxide, a Greenhouse gas. It floats up towards the atmosphere, and becomes the atmosphere. This causes the hat from the sun to get trapped, bouncing from the earth to the atmosphere. The sun doesn't stop producing heat, so the world gets hotter, causing many changes in temperature each decade that goes by.
Nvm, I got it!
I changed it to:
Many every day activities lead to global warming because they produce pollution. When gas is burned in a car, it produces carbon dioxide, a Greenhouse gas. It floats up towards the atmosphere, and makes holes in the atmosphere which lets in those harmful UV radiation and sometimes also adds more atmosphere which could turn earth into the next venous. This causes the heat from the sun to get trapped, bouncing from the earth to the atmosphere. The sun doesn't stop producing heat, so the world gets hotter, causing many changes in temperature each decade that goes by.
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Sure! Here's a reworded version:
Numerous daily tasks contribute to the phenomenon of global warming due to the emissions they produce. For instance, when gasoline is burned in a vehicle, it releases carbon dioxide, which is a greenhouse gas. This gas rises into the atmosphere and becomes trapped, leading to a buildup of heat from the sun that cannot escape. Consequently, the Earth experiences a continuous increase in temperature, resulting in noticeable changes in temperature patterns over the passing decades.