Please kindly help me to correct my english grammar.
Dear sir,
Good day, I just want to confirm from you if it is true the rampant rumors regarding the company.I just heard from this rumors mostly from company staff that it is already being purchased by other company.
I'm just worried being your new staff if they will retain or replace and send back home. i'm sorry for asking you this matter since i know this is a top secret for any company. i am thanking you so much for everything for helping me to work back in the company.
Thank you for your kind hearted and helping me always.
Wish you all the best May God bless you Good health and your family circle.
jerry
I am wondering if you proofed this yourself. There are dozens of errors in it. I will do a couple of sentences, expecting you clean it up.
<< i am thanking you so much for everything for helping me to work back in the company.>> I appreciate you allowing me to work in the company.
<< i'm sorry for asking you this matter since i know this is a top secret for any company>> I fully understand this is closely-held information in the company, but I need some information for personal planning.
<<english>> English
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Dear Sir,
I hope this email finds you well. I am reaching out to you to ask for your assistance in correcting my English grammar. I have written a message and I would appreciate your guidance in making it more grammatically correct. Here is the message:
"Good day. I wanted to inquire about the rumors circulating in the company. I have been hearing from fellow staff members that the company has been acquired by another company. As a new employee, I am concerned about whether I will be retained or if I will be replaced and sent back home. I apologize for asking about this matter, as I understand it is confidential information for any company. I am immensely grateful for your support in helping me return to work at the company.
Thank you for your kind-heartedness and constant assistance. I wish you all the best. May God bless you with good health and happiness for you and your family.
Jerry"
To correct the grammar in your message, I made the following changes:
- "if it is true the rampant rumors regarding the company" was changed to "if the rumors circulating in the company are true."
- "I just heard from this rumors mostly from company staff that it is already being purchased by other company" was changed to "I have been hearing these rumors mostly from company staff members that the company has been acquired by another company."
- "I'm just worried being your new staff if they will retain or replace and send back home" was changed to "As a new employee, I am concerned about whether I will be retained or if I will be replaced and sent back home."
- "i'm sorry for asking you this matter since i know this is a top secret for any company" was changed to "I apologize for asking about this matter, as I understand it is confidential information for any company."
- "i am thanking you so much for everything for helping me to work back in the company" was changed to "I am immensely grateful for your support in helping me return to work at the company."
I hope these corrections help improve your email. If you have any further questions or need additional assistance, please feel free to ask.
Best regards,
[Your Name]