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All things considered, it seems reasonable to accept that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals as it could help and improve of find cures for the
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  1. This makes no sense.

    Is there some punctuation missing and/or some excess words that need removing?

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  2. All things considered, it seems reasonable to accept that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable as it could help and improve to find cures for the illnesses. How can I improve? what words shall I remove?

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  3. I'd omit "to accept" and "as" and "and improve to" and put a period after "acceptable." I'd change "it" to "This practice"

    What do you get?

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  4. I don't get it...

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  5. You don't get what? I told you exactly how to fix this sentence!

    If you rewrite it all, as I told you above, I'll check it for you.

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  6. All things considered, it seems reasonable to that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable as this practice could help to find cures for the illnesses

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  7. You followed some of my directions but not all.

    Re-do.

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  8. What do u mean by put a period after acceptable?

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  9. Exactly that. Make the first sentence stop there and start a new sentence.

    Starting a new sentence will require some re-wording, which I've also told you how to do.

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  10. All things considered, it seems reasonable to that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable. This practice could help to find cures for the illnesses.
    Like so?

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  11. Almost!

    Just remove "to" after "reasonable" and you'll be all set!

    =)

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  12. Thanks

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  13. You're welcome.

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  14. what percentage of animal testing is successful

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  15. I'm not against it...

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  16. It's for my argumentative essay

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