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3. Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below?
Mrs. Benoit is the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.
a. Mrs. Benoit does events for a nonprofit organization.
b. Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization.
c. Mrs. Benoit is the one who creates events for a nonprofit organization.
d. Mrs. Benoit turns out to be the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.

I am going between b and d.....but I'm not entirely sure...Can someone please help me and also explain why that answer is correct!?!?!? PLEASE!!

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  1. D is very wordy. Go for the concise!
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm

  2. Thank you so much! :)

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  3. You're welcome.

  4. his emotional breakdown and tears after telling what happened
    Van der Vyver in not s typical south african farmer....
    situational
    unfeelingly
    mrs. benoit organizes events for a non profit organization

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