Individuality, which leads to becoming a social outcast, is expressed specifically within these two films “Edward Scissorhands” and “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”.

Question

Individuality, which leads to becoming a social outcast, is expressed specifically within these two films “Edward Scissorhands” and “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”.

Did I use the right punctuations in this sentence

Answer 1

If you are using British English, yes, it's correct.

If you are using American English, the period at the end needs to be before the closing quotation marks.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm

Answer 2

A comma is needed after films.

Answer 3

... and that comma, yes. Thanks, Ms. Sue. =)

Answer 4

And thanks for the period and quotation marks clarification. :-)

Answer 5

I like this phrase on that linked webpage: "regardless of logic"

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Answer 6

Would you also put commas inside the quotations too

Answer 7

Individuality, which leads to becoming a social outcast, is expressed specifically within these two films “Edward Scissorhands” and “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”.

If you are using British English, yes, it's correct.

A comma is needed after films.

... and that comma, yes. Thanks, Ms. Sue. =)

And thanks for the period and quotation marks clarification. :-)

I like this phrase on that linked webpage: "regardless of logic"

Would you also put commas inside the quotations too

Please study the website that Writeacher linked.