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"The text is about a lonely boy - Mark - son of murderer.
As far as Mark's father is concerned he was drank before accident. Once upon a time when he was drunk he decided to back home by car. He should have come back by foot. Unfortunately Mark's father killed two people. In short time all people knew about accident. Since then everyone have stared at Mark. He wish he hadn't been son of murderer. As I have metioned before Mark was lonely. He came to the came to the conclusion he would commit a suicide. Then he heard Helen's voice. She was his acquaintance from school. Girl told him he wouldn't do that. Teenager didn't want to stay him alone. She didn't think he had been worse than another.
It was a first calm night after accident."
Please be forgiving for me, since I'm from Poland.

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