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Can you please help me rephrase this song?

1)The song is about a successful city-dweller caught in a rat race. However, he is tired of continuously competing for success and leading a very stressful life in the city.
2) He decides to move to the country to relax.Now he lives in a very big house in the country but he doesn't have much to do.
3) He takes all sorts of pills and keeps piling up analysist bills (he goes to the analysist because he is dissatisfied with his life). He doesn't really know what he wants out of life.

  • English -

    1 OK

    2 - need space after the period and a comma in the second sentence

    3 - analyst (<~~watch the spelling) or therapist

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