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Decisions, Decisions, Decisions
Decisions everyone has to make them. Some decisions are hard and important and some are not. The decision I had to make was did I still want to be the statistician for the varsity Girls and Boys basketball team.
“Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock,” went my head as my mind drifted of what to do. I said to myself, “What makes me happy, as I sat on my bed wondering?” I thought about what were some of my choices I had that I could feel excited on what decision I chose to make. My choices were as followed; play basketball for Varsity Girls and be statistician /manager for boys.
My coach said, “Alanna, your playing time will be limited.”
I said, “ I know,” as I thought very hard on making my decision. I would play on the Varsity Girls basketball for one year and be statistician for Varsity Girls and Boys basketball. Then I thought about how I loved playing basketball and what I can contribute to the ball team.
I finally decided that I would play Junior Varsity girls basketball and be the statistician for Varsity Boys and Girls basketball team. I chose this because I would not get the playing time I thought I deserved. So the decision I made would be the best for me.

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    from 1-6(1 being the lowest,6 being the highest),i would give u a 5.

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    Thank you Im veryy happy.

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    welcome(:

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