Yr 10 English

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Hey guys,

Need help with an intro of this question or a prompt.

Imagine you're a 12 year old boy from Afghanistan who is newly arrived in Australia. Write a diray entry outlining your experiences of your first day at school. Include 5 words from the spelling list to include in your piece.

Words are: campaign, exceeded, universally, diversity, regional, orgin, economic, globalization, generosity, fundamental, unfortunate, concept, implication, emergence, optimism.

As for as I know the main theme is more about multi-cultrialism but i may be wrong.

PS I have read the post the Alice posted but I need help with an intro/prompt.

  • Yr 10 English -

    DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet?

    Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever:

    Prewriting: Brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement

    Writing: Write first draft by starting with section II of your outline; write the introduction after the body of the paper is written; write the conclusion last.

    Polishing: Revise, concentrating first on the body of the paper, then the intro, then the concl (revision = making sure ideas are logical and sequential and support your thesis); proofread (spelling, grammar, usage, etc.)

    Do you have a thesis yet? Have you done your brainstorming (and maybe research) yet? Have you written an outline?

    http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/catalogue.html#org
    from http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/catalogue.html

    http://www.angelfire.com/wi/writingprocess/

    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/
    Check in the Essay & Research Paper Level.

    Let us know.

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    http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1298373236

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