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I would like to know if there are any errors . like comma uuseage question marks,quotation mark, and apostrophes, capitalization, colons,semicolons, andcommonly misuesd words Why are many students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers? Benjamin Franklin said; A penny saved is a penny earned.” This principle applies to the American and foreign online student. Today students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters and supplies.

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    Benjamin Franklin said. "A penny saved is a penny earned." This principle applies to the American and foreign online student. Today's students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters, and supplies.

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    Surely that's not your whole answer. What can you add to make sure your answer is complete?

    How do online courses help you save money on transportation? Be specific and give lots of detailed examples.

    How do online courses help you save money on babysitters? Again, be specific ...

    How do online courses help you save money on supplies? Be specific ...

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    Please read and study the ideas here -- and apply them in your writing:
    http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/07/07/the-differences-between-college-writing-and-high-school-writing/

    These ideas will help you make your writing much better than just average!

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