posted by Larry .
The sun's rays caress my face like a mother would.
Would this simile work? Make sense?
I would use like a mother's touch.
My mother might have had hold of both ears pulling on them.
On this, It is OK, but I would make it stronger with something like
I felt the sun caress my face as my mother hands would.
i like it
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