posted by Bernadette .
I need you to grade my paper for me . I don't have a car and I don't know the area well enough to ask anyone to grade it for me I just want you to grade it for me. and leave the red marks on it for me so I can correct it my self and send it back to me through email. If it's ok , can I send it to you threw email? that's all.
I don't know how long your essay is, but we can do short essays. If yours is long, post a few paragraphs here, from the red marks you get, you should be able to find what types of errors and revisions you need to make. Post it here.
Before you post your paragraphs, please make sure you have proofread it yourself. Go over your paper with the following in mind. Thanks to PsyDAG for the following:
After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.