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I left out two important things. Hopefully, you can have a look at them.
First, the sentence you asked me to vary;

1) The following items will be assessed: the pupils’ attitude towards the European Union, their disposition to mobility and their knowledge of both English and ICT.
2) I have checked everything now! From a linguistic point of view, everything was just perfect. Mainly minor mistakes due to tiredness. (Make sure to check every paragraph).
3) By the way, it would be nice if your principal could drop a few lines (in Italian) to our school's principal telling him he was glad to meet us during our preliminary meeting and demonstrating his appreciation for our mutual cooperation and efforts. Both of us have worked really hard on the project and deserve a formal congratulation (??) on behalf of our principals.
4) No one here knows about my efforts as I did almost everything by myself. As you know, I’m not going to receive any money from it! I did it for a right cause (??) and now
5) I’m really very pleased that our project will be supported by a German Member of Parliament.
Good luck with your daughter. Luckily, my son has fully recovered from the flue!Let me know if there is anything you can’t understand.

asked by Henry2
  1. 1) The following items will be assessed: the pupils’ attitudes towards the European Union, their disposition to mobility, and their knowledge of both English and ICT. This is much more clear. Good!

    2) I have checked everything now! From a linguistic point of view, everything was just perfect. There were mainly minor mistakes due to tiredness. (Make sure to check every paragraph.)

    3) By the way, it would be nice if your principal could drop a few lines (in Italian) to our school's principal telling him he was glad to meet everyone during our preliminary meeting and demonstrating his appreciation for our mutual cooperation and efforts. Both of us have worked really hard on the project and deserve formal congratulations on behalf of our principals.

    4) No one here knows about my efforts as I did almost everything by myself. As you know, I’m not going to receive any money from it! I did it because it was the right thing to do!

    5) I’m really very pleased that our project will be supported by a German Member of Parliament.

    Good luck with your daughter. Luckily, my son has fully recovered from the flu! Let me know if there is anything you don’t understand.

    posted by Writeacher

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