I urgently need to know if the following sentence is possible:
1) Robinson told the captain his story on how he had been made a slave.
2) The waves started crashing onto the ships.
2 is fine.
1 - Delete "his story about" and it'll be fine.
1) Robinson told the captain his story on how he had been made a slave.
2) The waves started crashing onto the ships.
1 - Delete "his story about" and it'll be fine.