I urgently need you to check these few sentences.I need to reword sentence two.
I need to convince them to start a partnership with our school.
1)Thank you very much for your last e-mail. I really hope your teachers will agree to work on a common project in English. The topic of our project could also be related to history, art or geography. Many among our teachers will be happy to help our students in their research.
2) We will include only well-motivated students (with the best marks) who are willing to devote time to the project.
3)I want to emphasize the fact that it is extremely important for us to start a partnership with them. How can I finish off my e-mail??
1) Thank you very much for your last e-mail. I really hope your teachers will agree to work on a common project in English. The project could also focus on to history, art, or geography. Many of our teachers will be happy to help our students in their research.
2) We will include only students who are high-achievers and who are willing to devote sufficient time to the project.
3) The faculty and staff here at _______ School believe that it is really important for us to enter into such a partnership with your school. We all look forward to working with you.
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Sure, here is a reworded version of sentence two:
"We will select only highly motivated students with excellent grades, who are dedicated to investing time into the project."
To finish off the email, consider using the following phrases to emphasize the importance of starting a partnership:
4) "In conclusion, establishing a partnership with your school holds immense value to us. Together, we can create a collaborative and enriching educational experience for our students."
5) "To summarize, I cannot stress enough the significance of initiating a partnership with your esteemed institution. Working together, we can foster mutual growth and provide exceptional learning opportunities for our students."
6) "Lastly, I sincerely hope you will consider this proposal for a partnership as it is of utmost importance for our school. Together, we can pave the way for a fruitful and rewarding relationship that will benefit our students' education."
Feel free to choose the option that best suits your email's tone and message.