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I need help writting a discussion on why the follow paragraph is effective including variety and rhythum of the author's writing:Individuals can be denied credit for a number of reasons. Individuals who are near limits on existing cards, have too much outstanding debt or too many accounts overall, have a history of late payments, charge-offs or bankruptcy are likely to be denied credit. Individuals denied credit, by law, will receive a letter documenting the reason for the denial under the Fair Credit Reporting Act. Individuals who receive that letter should then examine the reasons for the denial and make efforts to correct their credit.

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  1. What is the first word of each sentence in that paragraph? What does that indicate to you?

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