Ms Sue please help

Can someone look over my assignemnt for accuracy please.
Punctuation within Sentences—Colon

1. The book had some nice features, such as: a hard-bound cover, a ribbon for a bookmark, and the author’s signature.2. German grammar is simple: in that language, and there are no exceptions to the rules.3.Her daughter went on a diet that consisted of all fast food: hamburgers, hot dogs, and french fries.4.The little boy handed Santa a list that said he wanted: a truck, a train and a million dollars.
These are my answers: GuruBlue was confused or something. Thanks

asked by Mckenzie
  1. Please see the answers I posted to your original questions.

    posted by Ms. Sue
  2. Thanks You so much.

    posted by Mckenzie
  3. Ms. Sue is correct; the second sentence is better with a semicolon. You also need to delete the word "and" from that sentence.

    posted by Writeacher

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