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I'm writing a personal letter and I was wondering if you could check to see if my grammar in these following sentences is correct or if it's missing a comma. I don't want to post the entire letter because its personal. Thank you.

I am so blessed to have you in my life and I would not be where I am today if it was not for you.

All of our heart felt conversations that we have had and continue to have, help keep my mind in the right direction.

Thank you for being there when I had my MRI done. My nerves got the best of me and you being in the room helped me make it through the test.

You helped me to not be scared, about all the things I feared. When other people put me down, you helped me get right back up

I could not ask for a better uncle, godfather, and friend. We have become even closer and have created a bond that is unbreakable.

I never imagined that it would come to the point where I would have to go out of state for medical help.

You are my guardian angel and I am so blessed. (Should the word guardian angel be capitalized)

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  1. I am so blessed to have you in my life, and I would not be where I am today if it were not for you.

    All of our heart-felt conversations help keep my mind ____ in the right direction.

    Thank you for being there<~~[where is "there"?] when I had my MRI done. My nerves got the best of me, and because you were in the room, I was able to make it through the test.

    You helped me not to be scared about all the things I feared. When other people put me down, you helped me get right back up.

    I could not ask for a better uncle, godfather, and friend. We have become even closer and have a bond that is unbreakable.

    I never imagined that I would have to go out of state for medical help.

    You are my guardian angel, and I am so blessed.

    Be sure to compare yours and mine VERY CAREFULLY to catch all the large and small corrections.

  2. if it were not for you.

    heartfelt conversations that we have had and continue to have help

    scared about all (no comma)

    I wouldn't capitalize guardian angel.

    Everything else looks good.

  3. Thanks for your help. Can you please check this last paragraph for me. It doesnt sound right when I read it because I think it's missing some grammar.

    Even when I am sad, all I can do is smile and show other people that I make the best out of everything. Life has so much to offer and I want to go out there and make a difference in this world. I have learned so much about myself and what my strengths and weaknesses are. Along the way people have told me that I am not the same person as I was before.

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  4. Your last paragraph is good. The only suggestions I'd make are to omit "out" (make the best of everything) and add a comma after "offer."

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