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Can someone help me with this answer check if its right ok the question says After Reading discuss what you think people can learn from those who are dying? So i put
Well people can learn a lot from kids that are dying. The kids can sense of their sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch kind of like the imagery to their death. They have all wisdoms in the world they can teach you all about life if you can listen to them. For example in this story Alain could describe the pain and agene that they feel they could show you thing you never knew about your welds you can learn a lot about dying people or kids of any kind.

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  1. this for the story unfinished business by elisabeth kubler-ross.

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  2. Well people can learn a lot from kids that are dying.
    Omit "well." Use "who" not "that."

    The kids can sense of their sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch kind of like the imagery to their death.
    I don't understand what you mean.

    They have all wisdoms in the world they can teach you all about life if you can listen to them.
    "Wisdom" should be singular. This is a run-on sentence.

    Please make these corrections, carefully proofread the rest of your paragraph, and repost.

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  3. People can learn lots of things from kids that are dying. The kids can show you sight, hearing, smell, taste, or touch to their death. They would show you all wisdoms in the world, and can teach you all about life if you can listen to them. For example in this story Alain could describe the pain and agene that they feel they could show you thing you never knew about your welds you can learn a lot about dying people or kids of any kind.

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  4. Please re-read Ms. Sue's corrections and instructions. You didn't make all the corrections she indicated, nor did you make that 2nd sentence any clearer.

    Please re-do.

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