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My Mother

My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent this woman from above
When I cried she had a listening ear
My mother always wiped away all my tears
She took away all my worries and fears
There was no doubt of my mother’s love
My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent his woman from above

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  1. The lines are now correct.

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  2. A
    B
    a - Rhymes with 1st line.
    A - Identical to 1st line.
    a - Rhymes with 1st line.
    b - Rhymes with 2nd line.
    A - Identical to 1st line.
    B - Identical to 2nd line.

    Line 3 is not identical but I'd say it rhymes. Something with the final "s" could be: hears, jeers, leers, nears, years

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  3. Watch the 5th word in that 8th line.

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