Did I correct my triolet?
My Mother
My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent this woman from above
When I cried she had a listening ear
My mother always wiped away all my tears
She took away all my worries and fears
There was no doubt of my mother’s love
My mother always wiped away all my tears
God must have sent his woman from above
The lines are now correct.
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A
B
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
b - Rhymes with 2nd line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
B - Identical to 2nd line.
Line 3 is not identical but I'd say it rhymes. Something with the final "s" could be: hears, jeers, leers, nears, years
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Watch the 5th word in that 8th line.
To determine if you corrected your triolet, you need to understand the basic structure and rules of a triolet. A triolet is a poetic form consisting of eight lines with a specific rhyme scheme and repetition patterns. In a triolet, the first line is repeated as the fourth and seventh lines, while the second line is repeated as the final line. Additionally, the rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB.
Let's check if your poem follows these guidelines:
"My Mother" - This seems to be the title of your poem, so it doesn't impact the structure or repetition pattern.
Line 1: "My mother always wiped away all my tears" - This is the first line of the poem and will be repeated later. It adheres to the theme of a mother's care.
Line 2: "God must have sent this woman from above" - This line does not need to adhere to any repetition pattern and seems to express gratitude and reverence towards your mother.
Line 3: "When I cried she had a listening ear" - This line does not need to adhere to any repetition pattern and speaks of your mother's attentive nature.
Line 4: "My mother always wiped away all my tears" - This line repeats the first line, which is necessary. The repetition pattern is properly followed.
Line 5: "She took away all my worries and fears" - This line does not need to adhere to any repetition pattern and conveys the soothing effect your mother has on you.
Line 6: "There was no doubt of my mother's love" - This line does not need to adhere to any repetition pattern and expresses your unwavering belief in your mother's love.
Line 7: "My mother always wiped away all my tears" - This line repeats the first line, adhering to the repetition pattern.
Line 8: "God must have sent his woman from above" - This line is the same as line 2, serving as the final line and adhering to the rhyme scheme.
Looking at the structure and repetition pattern, it seems that you have corrected your triolet successfully.