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Could you please check this paragraph? It is really urgent. Thank you!!

1)My name is Michele and I was born in Torino on 23 march 1997. When I was three years I went to Rome with my family.
2) Now I have got 14 years old and I go to secondary school .
3)I have got a lot of friend in my class, but we have a problem: the football, I’ m the only in the class to support juventus and the others member of the class support a different football time like Napoli or Roma and for this reason we often argue.
4) My family is formed by my mother lucia, my father Francesco and my sister Laura.
5) My hobbies are play tennis and play football, sometimes in my free time I play at computer game or I read a fantasy book.

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  1. 1)My name is Michele and I was born in Torino (Turin in English but fine as is) on 23 march 1997. When I was three years (old) I (moved) to Rome with my family.
    2) Now I **** (am) 14 years old and I go to secondary school .
    3)I have *** a lot of friend(s) in my class, but we have a problem: *** football. I’m the only (student) in the class (who) support(s) (J)uventus and the other* member(s) of the class support *different football t(ea)ms* like Napoli or Roma. *** For this reason we often argue.
    4) My family (consists of) my mother (L)ucia, my father Francesco and my sister Laura.
    5) My hobbies are **** tennis and *** football(.) (S)ometimes in my free time I play at (a) computer game or I read a fantasy book.

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  2. Oh - March, not march

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  3. Henry, it would really help if we were sure you are learning British English or American English. There are subtle (and some not so subtle!) differences.

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