The evidence about the detectives being uncomfortable in paragraph 66 is irrelevant because it does not contribute to proving the claim that Mary Maloney successfully conceals the murder of her husband. This evidence merely describes the detectives' discomfort, which doesn't directly relate to Mary's success in concealing the crime or her strategies for doing so.
The evidence about Mary's concern for her unborn baby in paragraph 34 is relevant to the claim because it establishes her motivation for concealing the murder. It shows that Mary's primary concern is for the safety and well-being of her child, which drives her actions throughout the story.
Therefore, the evidence about Mary's concern for her unborn baby remains relevant to the paragraph's claim, while the evidence about the detectives' discomfort is irrelevant and can be eliminated.
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