ADDING DESCRIPTIVE DETAILS:
Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.
11. My friend and I ate soup.
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12. Anna took her dog on a walk.
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13. Lucas cleaned his room.
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14. Abigail helped her mom bake a cake.
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11. My friend and I devoured steaming bowls of aromatic chicken noodle soup on a cold winter evening by the crackling fireplace.
12. Anna leisurely strolled her fluffy golden retriever named Max through the vibrant, bustling park on a sunny Sunday afternoon.
13. Lucas meticulously organized and dusted every corner of his cluttered room, filling the air with the fresh scent of lemon-scented cleaning spray.
14. Abigail enthusiastically whipped up a decadent, from-scratch chocolate layer cake in her cozy, sunlit kitchen with her apron-clad mom, savoring the sweet aroma of vanilla and cocoa filling the air.