ADDING DESCRIPTIVE DETAILS:

Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.

11. My friend and I ate soup.

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11. My friend and I sat in the cozy, dimly lit cafe on a rainy afternoon, savoring the delicious aroma of freshly made tomato bisque soup with chunks of tangy, melted cheddar cheese, and crispy, buttery croutons scattered on top.