Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.
11. My friend and I ate soup.
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12. Anna took her dog on a walk.
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13. Lucas cleaned his room.
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14. Abigail helped her mom bake a cake.
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11. On a cold, rainy day, my friend and I savored warm, savory tomato soup in a cozy, dimly lit cafe.
12. Anna walked her energetic golden retriever, Max, along the bustling city streets under the midday sun.
13. Struggling to find space among the piles of clothes, books, and toys, Lucas meticulously organized his cluttered room.
14. In the fragrant kitchen filled with the sweet aroma of vanilla, Abigail cheerfully assisted her mom in carefully measuring and mixing ingredients to bake a fluffy chocolate cake.