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Due to their schools' rivalry, Andrew has a bad opinion about Emoryville residents, while Patrick, who is from Emoryville himself, stays silent and feels uncomfortable about Andrew's remarks. These two points of view represent the two opposing viewpoints in the narrative. As Patrick tries to steer the topic away from himself, Andrew inadvertently offends his hometown, which adds to the situation's hilarity. The suspense stems from the uncertainty surrounding Patrick's intention to disclose his origins and Andrew's potential response upon learning of them.