One of Alvarez 's first impressions of the States was when she was in a plane with her family on her way to the states. Alvarez was in awe when she saw the skyscrapers as she had come from a third-world country, and she had never been above a second story.
Make the sentences above into three separate facts about Alvarez
1. Alvarez's first impression of the States was seeing the skyscrapers from a plane with her family.
2. Coming from a third-world country, she was in awe of the tall buildings as she had never been above a second story.
3. Alvarez had never experienced such a view before, which left a lasting impression on her.