Question
Read the sentence.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games, and when Robbie is playing video games after school, he likes to have a snack.
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in the sentence?
Responses
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and while he is playing video games he likes to have a snack.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and while he is playing video games he likes to have a snack.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and have a snack.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and have a snack.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and at the same time he is playing he likes to have a snack.
After school, Robbie likes to play video games and at the same time he is playing he likes to have a snack.
After school, while Robbie is playing video games, he also likes to have something to eat, like a snack.