'You're Abraham Lincoln's campaign manager. Your job is to convince the public to elect him sixteenth president of the US. Write an appeal to voters--to be printed in newspapers around the country--urging them to vote for him. "Sell" Lincoln to the public by emphasizing his qualifications: his character, background, achievements, and plans for the country's future.'
Is this alright?
Vote for Abraham Lincoln to be the next president of the United States and you won’t regret it! Lincoln was born in Hardin County, Kentucky on February 12, 1809. He moved to Indiana in 1816 and lived there the rest of his youth. His mother died when he was nine but he was very close to his stepmother who urged him to read. Lincoln worked as a clerk before joining the military. He ran for the state legislature and lost in 1832. Mr. Lincoln has studied law and was admitted to the bar in 1836. He served as a US Representative (1847-49). He was elected to the state legislature in 1854 but resigned to run for the US Senate.
If Abraham Lincoln does become president, this country will see remarkable progress: the wars will be stopped, and the people will have more rights. Moreover, this man is very kind and broad-minded; the peoples’ ideas will not be overseen with Mr. Lincoln as our president, so cast your vote today!
-MC
When you're trying to sell something (or someone) use only positive words, not negative words. For instance, I was turned off by your first sentence, "you won't regret it."
Next, biographies do not sell candidates to voters. Give the voters reasons to elect him. You made a stab at it in the end but it's much to general.
What wars will be stopped? What specific progress will be made. Who will have more rights? What rights? Be specific.
I don't care if he is "kind." Hitler was supposedly "kind" to his dog!
And what do this mean? ". . . the peoples’ ideas will not be overseen with Mr. Lincoln as our president, . . ."
The last sentence means that he will consider all ideas that the people of the US give to him, and he won't ignore any complaints. how can i write that in a better way?
Thanks
-MC
Hmmmm. My ancestors, in Texas, would probably have voted Lincoln. Lincoln was in a moderate camp which advocated a Constitutional Amendment to guarantee the South could keep slavery, and that Congress should pass on law changing that. This is about all the South wanted, in fact. You should be putting that forward in your Lincoln pitch.
However, many, many Texans did not trust the Republican Party then, as it was also the party of the abolitionists.
http://www.tulane.edu/~latner/Background/BackgroundElection.html
I think you mean the peoples' ideas will not be overlooked by Lincoln.
A better way of saying that might be: Lincoln will seriously consider everyone's ideas.
OK, thank you
-MC
Your appeal to voters for Abraham Lincoln's campaign is off to a good start! However, to further emphasize his qualifications and convince the public to vote for him, consider expanding on the following points:
1. Emphasize Lincoln's character: Highlight his integrity, honesty, and strong moral compass. Describe how he has consistently demonstrated these qualities throughout his personal and political life.
2. Elaborate on Lincoln's background: Provide more details about his upbringing and how it shaped him into the person he is today. Discuss his humble origins and how he overcame adversity to become a respected statesman.
3. Highlight Lincoln's achievements: Mention not only his political career but also his accomplishments and contributions to society. Include his work as a lawyer, his role as a congressman, and any other notable achievements that showcase his capabilities and dedication to public service.
4. Outline Lincoln's plans for the country's future: Enlist some of his key policy proposals that align with the needs and aspirations of the American people. Explain how his leadership and vision will bring about positive change, such as promoting unity, ending wars or conflicts, and protecting the rights and interests of all citizens.
Here's a revised version of your appeal:
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Vote for Abraham Lincoln, the man who embodies integrity, honesty, and the unwavering commitment to serving the American people. Born in Hardin County, Kentucky on February 12, 1809, Lincoln's upbringing instilled in him a deep sense of humility and an unbreakable spirit.
From an early age, Lincoln's insatiable thirst for knowledge, nurtured by his stepmother, set him on a path to greatness. His hard work and dedication led him to study law and become a respected lawyer, admitted to the bar in 1836.
Throughout his political career, Lincoln has consistently displayed a character rooted in moral values and respect for his fellow citizens. As a U.S. Representative from 1847 to 1849, he tirelessly fought for the rights and well-being of the American people, demonstrating his unwavering commitment to their interests.
Now, Abraham Lincoln is poised to lead our nation forward, offering a future that promises remarkable progress and positive change. With his leadership, we can envision a country where wars are halted, and individuals from all walks of life are granted the rights they deserve. Lincoln's broad-mindedness ensures that every citizen's voice will be heard and valued under his presidency.
Let us come together and cast our votes for Abraham Lincoln, the embodiment of integrity, achievements, and a visionary for a brighter tomorrow. With him at the helm, we can be confident that our nation's potential will be unlocked, and the American dream will flourish for all.
Vote for Abraham Lincoln - a leader with wisdom, compassion, and a resolute dedication to building a better future for each and every American citizen.
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Keep in mind that this is just a revised version, and you can further personalize it to fit the specific attributes and appeal of Abraham Lincoln to the voters.