I have a school interview and I have to name a strength and one of the strengths I put was dedication but I have to use this sentence starter

One of my strengths is dedication. This strength is as demonstrated by

my commitment to consistently putting in the effort and time needed to achieve my goals, whether academic or extracurricular. This dedication has allowed me to overcome obstacles and persevere through challenges, ultimately leading to successful outcomes in various aspects of my life.

use the sentence starter

One of my strengths is dedication. This strength is demonstrated by my unwavering persistence and determination in pursuing my goals, even when faced with obstacles or setbacks.