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Although stella student has a 4.0 gpa and has more involvement in the community, april applicant opens my eyes more with the photography aspect, their unwavering determination and future independence, caught my eye more
While Stella student's impressive 4.0 GPA and active involvement in the community are certainly commendable, it was April applicant's passion for photography, unwavering determination, and vision for future independence that truly captured my attention. April's unique perspective and drive to pursue their artistic dreams set them apart in a way that resonated deeply with me.
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stella student on social media appears to be rude towards others and negative
april applicant is nice and promotes their art work / photography
write 5 sentences on why you would pick april applicant although they have a lower GPA