Question

Use the sentence to answer the question.

"Kayla writes the following claim: I think school should only be four days a week."

In one to two sentences, determine why this claim needs to be revised. Then, write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay

This claim needs to be revised because it doesn't provide any reasoning or evidence to support the idea of having school only four days a week. A revised claim could be: "Reducing the number of school days to four per week would improve student well-being by allowing for more rest and free time, leading to increased focus and productivity in the classroom."