(5) That night, we stayed in a hotel in Topeka. (6) I shared a room with my brother and Dad while Mom and sister shared a smaller room. (7) Johnny talked in his sleep, and Dad snored the night away. (8) The misery of sleeplessness is too great to put into words. (9) In the morning, we had breakfast at the hotel. (10) All the options were stale or bland, but my siblings enjoyed everything that was offered. (11) I couldn’t believe my picky siblings had transformed into adventurous eaters on the road. (12) At least Dad ate until he had to take off his belt, and Mom ate her fill. (13) Once we loaded our luggage in the car and mostly full bodies in the car, we hit the road. (14) I regretted not stuffing my mouth in the morning because we didn’t stop for the next six hours.
Sentence 13 includes repeated information. Which revision MOST improves sentence 13?
Responses
A Once we loaded our luggage and mostly full bodies in the car, we hit the road.Once we loaded our luggage and mostly full bodies in the car, we hit the road.
B Once we loaded our luggage, we also loaded our mostly full bodies in the car, we hit the road.Once we loaded our luggage, we also loaded our mostly full bodies in the car, we hit the road.
C Once we loaded our luggage and bodies, we hit the road.Once we loaded our luggage and bodies, we hit the road.
D Once we loaded our luggage in the back of the car, we also loaded our mostly full bodies and then we hit the road.
C
Once we loaded our luggage and bodies, we hit the road.