The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivi
"Come on, you go first," said Sarah, nudging Jack towards the entrance of the cave. "No way, you go first!" Jack replied, shaking his head. "I'm scared, what if there's something in there?" Sarah whispered, her eyes wide with fear. "Fine, let's go in together," Jack said, steeling himself as they both took a deep breath and stepped into the dark and damp cave.
Make it sound like a 6th grade
"Uh-uh, you go first," Sarah whispered, nudging Jack towards the entrance of the cave. "Nuh-uh, scary cat, you go first!" Jack teased back, giving Sarah a playful shove. "I'm, like, totally scared! What if there's, like, a monster or something in there?" Sarah fretted, eyes wide with fear. "Okay, okay, let's just, like, go in together, okay?" Jack said, trying to be brave as they both took a deep breath and stepped into the dark and damp cave.
