Walking through the really busy streets of New York City, I was super amazed by all the tall buildings and people everywhere. My best friend, Sarah, was holding onto my arm really tight as we tried to make our way through the crowded sidewalks. But, uh-oh, we had a big problem! Our hotel reservation had been totally messed up and now we didn't have anywhere to stay for the weekend. We had to figure out what to do fast or else we'd be stuck in the city all alone.

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Walking through the super crowded streets of NYC with my best friend Sarah was so cool, but then disaster struck! Our hotel reservation got all mixed up and now we didn't have a place to stay. We had to figure out a plan quick or we'd be totally stranded in the big city!