In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.

make it short and make it sound like a 8 grader wrote it

We were having a picnic in the park, enjoying the sunny weather and fresh air. Suddenly, dark clouds rolled in and it started to rain, forcing us to pack up quickly and run for cover. After waiting out the storm under a nearby gazebo, the sun came back out and we were able to finish our picnic in the sunshine.