Question

The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform.

Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail

Answer 1

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

The little boy tightly clung to his mother's hand as the loud, bustling train zoomed past the crowded platform. He could feel the rumbling vibrations under his feet and hear the deafening roar of the engine.