(1)Located along the Gulf of Mexico, Cedar Key is indeed, one of the most peaceful and picturesque regions of Florida. (2) The sunsets here are, without a doubt, the finest in the world. (3) The breath-taking spectrum of colors as the sun sets gives the observer a sensation of awe. (4) It is truly a display of colors far superior to any Fourth of July fireworks. (5) Bursts of bright reds, oranges, and yellows form the background, of this spectacular phenomenon. (6) As the sun moves closer to the horizon its reflection shimmers on the gentle waves that caress the shore. (7) Silhouettes of Palm Trees can be seen in the foreground, as well as the shadows cast by a family, strolling along the sand in their bare feet, with the wind gently blowing through their hair. (8) Numerous aquatic birds, especially pelicans, swoop across the water, catching their dinner. (9) The weather-beaten, yet picturesque, docks serve as areas for them to perch and nest. (10) As the sun slowly slips into the horizon, the bright colors begin to fade and the softer blues and purples announce the coming of evening. (11) Few natural displays are as beautiful and emotional as the sunsets off Cedar Key.
Sentence 9: The weather-beaten, yet picturesque, docks serve as areas for them to perch and nest.
What corrections should be made to this sentence?
Question 3 options:
omit the comma after picturesque
change as areas to as an area
insert a comma after areas
change weather-beaten to weatherbeaten
no correction is necessary
The correct correction is: change as areas to as an area.
Therefore, the corrected sentence should read: "The weather-beaten, yet picturesque, docks serve as an area for them to perch and nest."