In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.(4 points)
add details and please make it sound like a 7th grader
On a sunny Saturday afternoon, my friends and I decided to go to the park for a picnic. We brought sandwiches, chips, and soda, and found a shady spot under a big oak tree. As we enjoyed our meal, we watched kids playing on the playground and families having a BBQ at nearby tables. After a couple of hours, the sun started to set, and we packed up our things and headed home, feeling tired but happy from our fun day in the park.
