The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
(4 points)
plz put a lot of detail and make it sound like a 7th graders writing
"Are you scared?" whispered Sarah to her younger brother, Jake. "Maybe a little," he admitted, his voice trembling slightly. "You go first then," Sarah nudged him, her eyes wide with curiosity. "Fine, but only if you come in right after me," Jake replied, taking a deep breath before stepping into the cave.
