Two children approach the cave cautiously the interior looked dark and damp, prodding each other gently each child tried to get the other to enter the cave, first and 3 to 5 sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid
"Hey, I dare you to go inside first," whispered Sarah to her friend Tommy.
Tommy shook his head, "No way, you go in first!"
Sarah hesitated, then nudged Tommy towards the cave entrance, saying, "Come on, don't be scared."
Tommy took a deep breath and reluctantly stepped inside, his eyes adjusting to the dim light as he ventured further into the mysterious cave.