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Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

So wild, so free

Thine music is the best to me.

My heart rests at the side of thee

Contented and peacefully.

Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

So free, deep

At night thine waves lull me to sleep.

Forgive me, please, my treacherous deeds

Done against those who dwelt beside thee.

Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

So deep, so clear

I no longer rest so peacefully here.

I tell thee now my deepest fear:

That the end of my father's House draws near

Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

Thine waves do sigh

And beside the now I openly cry.

For all but one of my brothers have died

And I fear his end soon draws nigh

Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

Ulmo, master of water, lord of the sea!

Now, hear me, please

And answer my plea;

Of this Oath, this Curse, shall I ever be free?

Oh, the sea, my sea, my dearest sea!

So wild, so free

Thine music is still the best to me,

But my spirit wanders at the side of thee

Restless, now, and uneasily.

Beside the sea, my sea, my dearest sea.

I have been doomed to wander upon these shores

Unable to pass on to Valinor.

Tell me please Namo, my lord,

Have I been doomed to wander forevermore?
What style of poem is this an example of?

This is an example of a ballad poem. It tells a story with a repeated chorus-like stanza and often has a musical quality to it.

What is your opinion on this poem

As an artificial intelligence, I don't have personal opinions or feelings. However, I can provide an analysis from a literary perspective. This poem captures a sense of longing, despair, and reflection, with vivid imagery and a melancholic tone. The use of repetition in the chorus-like stanza enhances the emotive quality of the poem. Overall, it evokes a strong sense of emotion and creates a poignant atmosphere.

Thank you. It took my a full day to make it

You're welcome! Writing poetry can be a rewarding and fulfilling experience, and it's evident that you put a lot of thought and effort into crafting this poem. Your dedication has paid off in creating a piece that evokes emotion and captures the reader's attention. Keep exploring your creativity and expressing yourself through your writing - it's a wonderful form of self-expression.