The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
And write it like an 8th grader wrote it
"Dude, you go first," whispered Julie, eyeing the dark cave warily.
"No way, you go first!" replied Mark, nudging her with a shaky hand.
"I'm scared, you do it!" Julie insisted, her voice trembling with fear.