Read this paragraph that a student wrote as part of a paper for history class. “ Both the day of The dead, or Día de los Muertos, and Hanal Pixán are centered around the celebration and remembrance of family members and friends who have died. In Mayan Version of day of the dead or Hanal Pixán (ha-nawl peesh-awn), which means “ Food for the souls,” They created mind blowing in intense altars in Honor of dead loved ones. The altars are adorned with marigold candles, and offering a fresh fruit to nourish the departed soul. Hanal Pixán takes place throughout Mexico’s Yucatán Peninsula while Día de los Muertos is celebrated in the central and south regions of the country on October 31 - November 2.” Which sentence should the student revise to make it more appropriate for the audience and purpose?
A) Sentence 1
B) Sentence 2
C) Sentence 3
D) Sentence 4
C) Sentence 3
The student should revise sentence 3 to make it more appropriate for the audience and purpose of a history class paper.