Read the paragraph from a students argumentative essay. “Americans today are increasingly reluctant to leave home for work. Having access to work technology and equipment at home has made commuting to the office an obsolete idea for many. These days people use their remote access devices for everything from co ducting meeting to having virtual happy hours, collaborating on projects, researching on the internet, and communicating with coworkers through office social media. However despite the useful nature of virtual technology, people are just online for work way too much.” Which revision of the underlined clause BEST maintains the formal style of the paragraph?
A) People are becoming excessively online for work
B) Lots of people take this Internet usage to super high levels
C) People all over utilizing their Internet, quite a lot
D) A bunch of people failed to put decent limits on using virtual