The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
(In kids words)
"Hey, I'm not going in first! It looks scary in there," said Timmy, his voice trembling with fear.
"You go first, Sarah, you're braver than me," replied Sarah, her eyes wide with trepidation.
"No way, you go first! I dare you!" Timmy egged her on, trying to sound brave.
"Fine, I'll go...but only if you come in right after me," Sarah finally relented, taking a step towards the cave entrance.